Kueni here from the Summer Learning Journey. I hope you are having a groovy Thursday morning.
Thank you for completing today's activity about Neil Armstrong. I think it is so cool that he was the first ever human to set foot on the moon, he must’ve had some of the best stories about his experience on the moon.
I really like that you have written about what the moon looks like and some of the different features of the moon. You have almost created a Haiku here with the amount of syllables you have per line.
Maybe you can try and make a Haiku poem about how you would feel if you were in Neil Armstrong’s shoes. Remember when you’re making a Haiku poem that you count out the syllables in each line otherwise it is not a Haiku poem. Remember it is 5 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second line and 5 in the third line. You can even try to clap out the syllables to help you check!
Have a go editing your post so that you have a successful Haiku poem :)
Salaam Alaikum Ahmad,
ReplyDeleteKueni here from the Summer Learning Journey. I hope you are having a groovy Thursday morning.
Thank you for completing today's activity about Neil Armstrong. I think it is so cool that he was the first ever human to set foot on the moon, he must’ve had some of the best stories about his experience on the moon.
I really like that you have written about what the moon looks like and some of the different features of the moon. You have almost created a Haiku here with the amount of syllables you have per line.
Maybe you can try and make a Haiku poem about how you would feel if you were in Neil Armstrong’s shoes. Remember when you’re making a Haiku poem that you count out the syllables in each line otherwise it is not a Haiku poem. Remember it is 5 syllables in the first line, 7 in the second line and 5 in the third line. You can even try to clap out the syllables to help you check!
Have a go editing your post so that you have a successful Haiku poem :)
Blog ya later,
Kueni.